QUOTE(冰封天下 @ 2011年01月26日 Wednesday, 11:39 PM)
我现在指出第二篇的错误之处--1.learning应改为are going to learn 或want to learn。
2,to Guangzhou 应改为in...
3nex year应改为 last year
4she going...应改为 she is going ...
5She has Beijing trip完全是中式英语
6She can playing 不知说什么,要删去
7storng 应改为strong
8He want to stornger应改为 He...